Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

It is true money than that famous
athlete
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can earn more many than other professional
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. Many
people
think it is justified but some
people
also
have different a side of view. 
Firstly
,
sports
professionals have spent almost all of their time by
praticisting
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participating
. And they have to train since they were young.
However
, some
althletes
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athletes
are not successful but they already spent all their younger days
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doing training. In
this
case, we can see that they have to risk their lives to
be succeed
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. Apart from
this
, athletes represent our countries and made us proud
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their hard work,
Moreover
, playing
sports
is really more tired than
Also
, they have a time limit with
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other jobs.
On the other hand
, there are many professional jobs that contribute to the
people
.As an example, doctors save
people
's lives and they still don't get as much as
sports
professionals.
In addition
, teachers are contributing to society by teaching uneducated children. And
also
engineers are building bridges and roads for country development. In conclusion, it is not acceptable that
sports
athletes can earn that much money because there are many professionals who are contributing to our society more than athletes.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial remuneration
  • exceptional
  • merit
  • talent
  • demand
  • entertainment value
  • career span
  • physical demands
  • justified
  • unfair
  • criticism
  • income inequality
  • societal priorities
  • sportsmanship
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