Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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small group of speakers, many
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have gone extinct annually. Some
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see that it is not
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problem because they believe that the fewer the number of
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are, the more convenient the communication is. From my point of view, I totally disagree with that opinion because I believe that
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of a
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is more than just a
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loss. A need to learn
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second
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language
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is a real struggle for some
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. In the
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multi-culture
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culture
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society, sometimes it's required to learn
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a foreign
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language
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for the business purpose or educational
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.
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, if an English man plans to run a company
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China where most
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doesn't
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know English and
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to speak their own
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, he won't survive for long without knowing
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the Chinese
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language
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.
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,
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, if an American student likes to study
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Japan, he must know
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the Japanese
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language
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at
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the
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place.
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because different countries are speaking different
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. If there are only a few
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exist
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on
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the world, most
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the countries will be speaking the same
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and communication between different nationalities and races will be much more convenient.
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,
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extinction has
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bad impact on
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history. When a
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dies, the culture of the
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who spoke that
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also
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will go extinct because
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defines the uniqueness of
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group of
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. Imagine that there is only the
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person left who can speak his native
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, he
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to start using
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second
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language
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to survive
among
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the
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society.
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, he will become out of practice and loses touch with memories of lost loved ones. When he dies, no one will know his native
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existed for centuries
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the world and
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no one will understand how his ancestors carried out their
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rituals in their native
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. That's the reason why some
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worth
cultures
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of cultures
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went extinct that can't be
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tracked
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track back
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by
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history.
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, in my opinion, it's important to
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preserve
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endangered
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. In conclusion, I suppose attempts should be made to preserve the
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which are at risk of extinction. The arts, literature and
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customs will disappear and
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may no longer be accessible if
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vanish. These advantages outweigh the struggles that one encounters to learn multiple
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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