Some people say history is one the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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curriculum while others believe that

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are more critical subjects than

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subjects like

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believe that the

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young age because of rapidly growing

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start learning basic computer programming at their primary level.

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around us.

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worked in the past and so we understand how it came to work the way it is now.

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widely believe that without

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modern days. In conclusion, while

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are essential to study in

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very important to learn an art subject like

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as both of them have

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own benefits. In my opinion, despite the popularity of

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, I believe that

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just as important as

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