Some people say history is one the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.

It is often argued that
History
is
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subject in
school
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curriculum while others believe that
Science
and
Technology
are more critical subjects than
History
in
this
day and age. In my opinion, I believe that
although
subjects like
Science
and
Technology
are important in
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modern days, it's
also
important to learn
History
in order to understand the
world
. The more advanced the
technology
has become, the more popular
Technology
and
Science
subjects are among the
students
.
Also
, nowadays, most
schools
believe that the
students
should be
familarized
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familiarized
with
Science
and
Technology
since
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their
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young age because of rapidly growing
technology
. Taking
schools
in Singapore as an example,
students
start learning basic computer programming at their primary level.
Moreover
, many people think that, in
this
tech age, if one doesn't
know
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learn
technology
, he will be left behind while there are great advantages and opportunities waiting for others who are good at
Science
and T9786echnology.
On the other hand
, some
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people
think that
History
is
also
important to study because it's essential for all of us in understanding ourselves and the
world
around us.
History
gives a very clear picture of how the various aspects of society
such
as
technology
, governmental systems and even society as a whole
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worked in the past and so we understand how it came to work the way it is now.
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also
widely believe that without
History
, people are not able to learn from
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past mistakes and make improvements.
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an instance, nowadays, many governments
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across
the
world
are
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democracy by learning the bad consequences of dictatorship from
the
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world
history
.
Therefore
,
schools
are still keeping
History
as an art subject in their
cirrulum
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curriculum
and
in addition
to that, there are
stil
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still
many
students
who are keen to learn
history
in
this
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these
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modern days. In conclusion, while
Science
and
Technology
are essential to study in
today
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world
, it's
also
very important to learn an art subject like
History
at
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as both of them have
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own benefits. In my opinion, despite the popularity of
Science
and
Technology
, I believe that
History
is
also
just as important as
Science
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Historical perspective
  • Analytical skills
  • Contextual understanding
  • Technological advancements
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • Innovation
  • Interdisciplinary
  • Job market
  • Climate crisis
  • Cultural identity
  • Critical thinking
  • Humanities
  • Contemporary issues
  • Integration
  • Tech-savvy
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