Some think investing in
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from university is the key to
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a good job, while some claim that getting working
is more critical to
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a better occupation. Personally speaking, I agree with both ideas as both of them
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an important role in the workplace.
with,
increases your professional knowledge which allows you
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more competitive. Nowadays, the amount of
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that a youth
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.
, about 77% of managers or bosses have studied a management degree after they graduated from university. The reason why they study
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degree is to prove their ability in managing a large
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of workers so that their chance
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becoming the boss booms. Meanwhile, based on some research, the heads are more willing to give opportunities to those with more degrees as having
symbolizes hardworking, and desiring to get improvement or progression, which is better to lead a team to achieve a better result.
Yet, does that mean
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is useless? It is definitely a 'no'.
With more working
, the higher the employees' ability in handling or
the working environment is.
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. Especially in the occupation which requires practical
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,
as nurses, doctors, or physiotherapists. If a person has more working
in related fields,
symbolizes that they are more passionate
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these occupations and with a higher opportunity to handle hardships.
, nurses with more working
are more capable of communicating with other medical professionals, while therapists with more
are more capable
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communicating with patients. Hardly can students learn these practical skills when they are in school.
, owning more
helps
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a good job.
In conclusion, despite
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more professional knowledge, working
results in a higher capability in occupation. Both can make a higher chance
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getting a better job and none of
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impacts should be underestimated or ignored.