In the past, many male leaders have led our society to conflicts and violence. The world would be better governed and more peaceful if it was ruled by women. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Many years ago,
world
war occurred in two-phase phases well-known as World
War I and World
War II. In that situation
, each ally consists of several countries that are led by male leaders. Considering that situation
, some people argue that women
would be better to lead than men because women
can address a well-ordered and more peaceful world
. To my view, the argument is not able to be truly agreed upon because a great leader is not seen by gender
, while the capability that can make a leader a role model.
First
of all, it is obvious that women
and men have their own character. The argument in the essay might be supported by the fact that men always tend to act assault in some position than women
. However
, the violence
Replace the word
violent
situation
in the past is not only caused by gender
but also
by high conflicts of interest that could be happened to any gender
. For example
, Margareth Thatcher, Former Prime Minister of the United Kingdom, preferred to seize a territory through warfare with Argentina than peaceful way. Furthermore
, Aung San Suu Kyi, Former President of Myanmar, was not competent to control the internal country situation
, hence
there was a coup d’etat by the military, as well as she let the Rohingya Conflict continue making some of her people suffer. In fact that both are female leaders.
Next
, there are some male leaders who can be role models that bring peacefulness such
as Nelson Mandella and Mahatma Gandhi. Nelson Mandella, Former President of South Africa, who fight the race discrimination issue in a peaceful way. Furthermore
, Mahatma Gandhi, one of the political figures in India, can lead the independence of India and also
highly support human rights without violence.
To summarize, violence that happened is not fully caused by gender
factors. It is obvious that gender
has its own character. However
, capability and leadership style are the main keys which can lead world
to be well-ordered and more peaceful.Add an article
the world
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