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average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

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The line graph provides information about the number average of
carbon
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 dioxide (CO2)
that is
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 produced by people in four
countries
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 between 1967 and 2007. Overall, the data indicated that the number of
carbon
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 production was decreasing trend for
countries
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 that produce high
carbon
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such
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 as the United Kingdom and Sweden.
on the other hand
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, the increase occurred for
countries
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 that created small
carbon
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such
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 as Italy and Portugal. In conclusion at the end of the year, the U.K. and Italy were
countries
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 that created high CO2. In 1967, the U.K. was the highest country that produced CO2 and it was followed by Sweden as the
second
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-highest which were about 11 and 9 metric tons respectively.
Then
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, the rate of
carbon
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 production decreased after
this
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 year until 2007 except for Sweden which increased in 1997.
In contrast
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, Portugal and Italy were
countries
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 with low
carbon
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 dioxide production which was about 1 and 4 metric tons in 1967 but increased continuously after that. At the end of the period, these
countries
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 created 5.8 and 7.9 metric tons respectively. Because of
this
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, Italy became the
second
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-highest
carbon
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 dioxide producing country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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