WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In the contemporary era,
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a nation is fully developed and economically stable, it
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has poor
people
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.
However
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, every nation has its own strategies and ideas to deal with
poverty
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. There are various causes behind increasing the rate of
people
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all over the world
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as overpopulation and unemployment, and providing free medical treatment along with free educational
facilities
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will be helpful to tackle these issues.
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details will be discussed in the following paragraphs along with suitable examples. To commence with, the
first
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and foremost reason behind
this
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is overpopulation. Some
people
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are not aware of family planning and despite having poor financial conditions, they have more children.
Therefore
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, these
people
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are not able to full fill the basic need of a large
number
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of family members, and due to
this
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these
people
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live below the
poverty
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line. Moving
further
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, the
next
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cause is unemployment. A recent survey,
for example
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by Times Now stated that almost 60% of
people
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in India do not have any source of income and even they have graduate degrees.
This
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is because the
number
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of vacancies is very less in every field.
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, these are major causes of
poverty
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.
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, there are a
number
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of remedies which can be beneficial for poor
people
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.
First
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of all, the government should provide free
health
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facilities
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to them.
Besides
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this
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, the authority can
also
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organise free
health
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awareness campaigns to educate them about mental and physical
health
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along with the benefit of family planning and how they can plan their family.
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, the government should free educational
facilities
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for poor children;
therefore
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, in the
future
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they can get a suitable
job
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jobs
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which will help them to become financially stable.
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, the authority should generate a large
number
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of job opportunities for the new generation. In conclusion, the main reasons behind
poverty
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are overpopulation and unemployment ;
however
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, governments can help them by free
health
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facilities
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along with free educational
facilities
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic disparity
  • historical factors
  • colonialism
  • wealth accumulation
  • poor governance
  • corruption
  • critical areas
  • entrenching poverty
  • quality education
  • unfair trade practices
  • natural disasters
  • climate change
  • disaster recovery
  • adaptation
  • microfinancing
  • entrepreneurship
  • economic self-sufficiency
  • social safety nets
  • unemployment benefits
  • food assistance
  • affordable healthcare
  • fair trade practices
  • financial stability
  • international aid
  • development projects
  • uplift
  • underprivileged communities
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