Examine the arguments in favour of and against animal experiments, and come to a conclusion on this issue. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays some people think that
animals
were created only for the needs of human beings. So it is often argued that
animals
must be examined by experts to know more information about drugs before applying them to humans. I strongly oppose
this
idea and
this
essay will examine the arguments in detail and provide a logical conclusion. First of all, most people support that favouring laboratory experiments on
animals
is the best way to
research
, analyse and observe the effects of different medical drugs before testing them on human beings.
For instance
, when spread covid-19 a few countries tested several medicines on
animals
such
as rabbits, mice and bats in China.
Moreover
, animal testing helps
to
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students who study in medical college to seek the required knowledge and advance in their
research
diploma. Researchers
also
aim to minimise the suffering that
animal
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experience.
On the other hand
, trials and experiments on
animals
are so cruel and we do not have the right to suffer them and to take away their habitats only for our
research
work. We as a community believe that
animals
' habitats should be protected by mankind. If we take away
animals
just for our needs like
research
work and the way to find
the
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cures
medicines
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,
then
there would be a danger
to
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the extinction of
animals
in the world. indeed, many countries which are industry
cosmetics
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of cosmetics
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test their cosmetics on
animal
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animals
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and it is not true that
animals
'
body
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the same as humans'.
That is
why we can take wrong results.
To sum up
, we should protect
animals
' rights and take care of their world. In my opinion, researchers must find a way to test medicines on other things.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • controversial
  • prevalence
  • scientific research
  • proponents
  • opponents
  • medical breakthroughs
  • vaccines
  • treatments
  • critical data
  • regulatory frameworks
  • ethical guidelines
  • minimize suffering
  • moral objections
  • animal rights
  • species differences
  • unreliable results
  • alternatives to animal testing
  • in vitro testing
  • computer modeling
  • volunteer microdosing
  • nuanced
  • complexity
  • weighing
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