You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter, Explain why you would like the job Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ. Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia. Write at lease 150 words.

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing in connection with an advertisement that I have seen in an Australian magazine. According to the description in the advertisement, I have to stay with a family for six months and need to take care of their six-year-old child. I am interested in

this

job because it would give me an opportunity to get experience which I will be able to add to my resume.

Moreover

, It will facilitate me to earn a decent amount of money which will help me pay off the mortgage. Me, I will be a suitable candidate for

this

position as I used to work at a nursing home. Given the previous fact, I can not only take care of your child's diet but

also

act quickly in case of an emergency. During my leisure time in Australia, I would love to explore scenic adventurous places

such

as beaches and hill stations. Contact me if you need any

further

details. I am hoping that you would consider me in view of my past experience. Your's sincerely, Gurpreet Kaur

Submitted by gurpreetmann1994 on Sat Apr 23 2022

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