Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is generally acknowledged by certain individuals that
people
have different aptitudes depending on the
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their
gender
, and therefore
they should have different occupations. Regarding this
, I strongly agree with this
assertion.
To begin
with, people
have different abilities depending on the
sex. While the right side of the brain which enhances the ability of science and mathematics of men is developed, the development of the left side of the brain which helps to increase the quality of linguistic and artistic skills in women can be seen. Change the word
their
For example
, recent media in Korea reports that people
prefer to hire women teachers as they believe the
difference Change preposition
in the
of
brains. As the example clearly illustrates, Change preposition
in
people
have different qualifications owing to the
biological development, so it is a good idea to find different Change the word
their
jobs
depending on the
Change the word
their
gender
.
Moreover
, some occupations require only one gender
groups
owing to the difference Fix the agreement mistake
group
of
Change preposition
in
the
physical abilities. Some Correct article usage
apply
jobs
such
as military service are
consist of males because as a matter of cultural Unnecessary verb
apply
different
, some male soldiers look down on women soldiers. Replace the word
differences
In addition
, as female soldiers’ bodies are more vulnerable, they cannot handle the same amount of work with
male soldiers. Change preposition
as
For instance
, the majority of crimes’
victims are females in Change noun form
crimes
army
. Add an article
the army
Therefore
, it is reasonable to point out that it is not a good idea both
Change preposition
for both
gender
Change to a plural noun
genders
have
the same Fix the infinitive
to have
jobs
.
In conclusion, owing to biological
and physical Add an article
a biological
difference
between genders, it is no doubt to point out that they should have different Fix the agreement mistake
differences
jobs
depending on the occupation.Submitted by hiasince38 on
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