Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is generally acknowledged by certain individuals that

people

have different aptitudes depending on

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gender

, and

therefore

they should have different occupations. Regarding

this

, I strongly agree with

this

assertion. 

To begin

with,

people

have different abilities depending on

the

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sex. While the right side of the brain which enhances the ability of science and mathematics of men is developed, the development of the left side of the brain which helps to increase the quality of linguistic and artistic skills in women can be seen.

For example

, recent media in Korea reports that

people

prefer to hire women teachers as they believe

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difference

of

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brains. As the example clearly illustrates,

people

have different qualifications owing to

the

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biological development, so it is a good idea to find different

jobs

depending on

the

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gender

.

Moreover

, some occupations require only one

gender

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owing to the difference

of

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the

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physical abilities. Some

jobs

such

as military service

are

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consist of males because as a matter of cultural

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, some male soldiers look down on women soldiers.

In addition

, as female soldiers’ bodies are more vulnerable, they cannot handle the same amount of work

with

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male soldiers.

For instance

, the majority of

crimes’

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victims are females in

army

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.

Therefore

, it is reasonable to point out that it is not a good idea

both

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gender

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have

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the same

jobs

. In conclusion, owing to

biological

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and physical

difference

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between genders, it is no doubt to point out that they should have different

jobs

depending on the occupation.