Nowadays people around the world are spending more money on consumer goods like TVs and microwave ovens. Is this a positive or negative development?

Excess of anything cannot be good. In my opinion,
this
negatively impacts the consumers. In
this
essay, I would illustrate how
consumer
goods
create an adverse impact on consumers.
Consumer
goods
create dependency on them. In the era prior to the development of these items, one would notice families gathering after meals playing board games or interacting with each other. With the birth of these
goods
, people are being disconnected as they spend their time now in front of the TV than focussing on interpersonal relationships.
Consumer
goods
create insecurities. In today's world, we live a life of comparisons. People are constantly comparing their
lifestyle
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to others on the basis of what they possess. Usage of products like mobile phones, beauty products and other electronic
goods
creates social and peer pressure on those who do not own these items. The insecurities of people compel them to buy these products to feel acceptable or socially equivalent to their peers. These
goods
are
also
harmful to the environment. It is very difficult to sometimes easily recycle these
consumer
goods
and most of them end up in landfills or oceans if they are not properly
disposed
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. Some of these commodities may
also
release toxic wastes which destroy not only the environment but
also
affect the health and welfare of the humans who live nearby. To summarize
this
essay,
consumer
goods
have created a lifestyle of insecurities, and social disconnections and brought harm to the environment. All of
this
in my opinion is a negative development.
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