The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think it will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

English has now become the global
language
due to tourism development. Some declared that
people
will only speak English in near future. Obviously, there will be pros and cons of having one
language
in the world and
this
essay will highlight
pros
Correct article usage
the pros
show examples
and cons of
this
concept with relevant examples.
First
of all, the most outstanding benefit of having
single
Add an article
a single
show examples
language
is eliminating
language
barriers. So, there will be no misunderstanding among
people
and they will be brought together intimately.
However
, having similarities in communication
also
means that
people
will not obtain the feeling of uniqueness.
Therefore
,
people
cannot easily define the differences between each other.
Secondly
, only one
language
can unite different countries by avoiding conflicts and close relationships will be developed to enhance important sectors of each country,
for instance
, trading.
Nevertheless
, it is not sure that
single
Correct article usage
a single
show examples
language
will be eliminated every problem of different
people
.
For example
, even me and my family speak the same
language
, we often have
quarrel
Fix the agreement mistake
quarrels
show examples
according to our own opinions.
Last
but not least,
single
Correct article usage
a single
show examples
language
has
prominent
Add an article
a prominent
show examples
effect on education. Students do not need to spend their time
to understand
Change the verb form
understanding
show examples
another
language
if they want to pursue their education in a foreign country
unlike
Add the comma(s)
,unlike
show examples
my sister who had to spend almost two years
by
Change preposition
apply
show examples
learning Japanese to study
a
Change preposition
for a
show examples
master
Change noun form
master's
show examples
degree
of
Change preposition
in
show examples
engineering.
In contrast
,
people
who enjoy
to learn
Change the verb form
learning
show examples
different languages
such
as polyglots will claim that having
monolingual
Fix the agreement mistake
monolinguals
show examples
is
the
Correct article usage
an
show examples
enormous disadvantage for them.
In contrast
,
although
there will be advantages and disadvantages of having one
language
in the world, I personally believe that it is unlikely to happen in our future as our world is constituted by various cultures and traditions.
Submitted by lwinlwinthein2017 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
What to do next:
Look at other essays: