The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of some nutrient categories in regular meals in the USA.
Overall
, while
the percentage
of sodium
and saturated fat occupies a main part, in
dinner, Change preposition
of
the
high rate of Correct article usage
a
sugar
is contained in snacks. Besides
, breakfast
, and lunch
show noticeably less percentage
of these unhealthy substances.
Whereas
the rate of sodium
and saturated fat account
for more than two-fifths and more than a Change the verb form
accounts
third
respectively, the percentage
of added sugar
in this
main meal is just over a fifth. In addition
, sub meals
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sub-meals
such
as snacks contain a considerable percentage
of unhealthy substances that is
over two-fifths of added sugar
, more than a fifth of saturated fat and more than a minority of sodium
.
In contrast
, breakfast
and lunch
witness a minimal number of unhealthy substances. The pie charts show→ demonstrate/ depict/ illustrate that the
Americans consume only 14% of Correct article usage
apply
sodium
at breakfast
,
and Remove the comma
apply
a
double Correct article usage
apply
percentage
of this
substance at lunch
. Besides
, the saturated fat and added sugar
share the same amount at 16% at breakfast
, while
these proportions are 26% and 19% at lunch
respectively.Submitted by khanh3802 on
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