Some people say that relationships should be based on honesty and trust. Others believe that it is sometimes necessary to be dishonest in order to maintain harmony. Which approach do you consider to be better in relationships and why?

These days, interactions and communication skills play a main role in our life. There is a common belief that people’s

relationships

should be based on

honesty

and

trust

. While

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another common belief about

this

approach is that dishonesty is essential in order to keep balance. In

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and give my opinion. It is certainly true that one of the essential aims of

relationships

is achieving harmony. The vast majority of them want to work at their

relationships

by being dishonest because they might avoid being judged based on their previous backgrounds. If citizens leak their past life or unrelated details, they will probably face

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unfair reactions and judgments, so

this

situation may create inevitable conflict or drift apart gradually.

For instance

, criminals with criminal backgrounds often are considering

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their previous illegal activities which belong

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past time and they will not probably commit offensive actions.

As a result

, it should be better to be dishonest not to

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by others.

In addition

, being dishonest would be necessary to deter from making tension and anxiety.

In other words

, people may be involved in stressful contexts, when they would be aware of all ins and ups in their close bonds.

For example

, adolescents in their domestic environment prefer to tell

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than telling truth because their parents might be

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,

therefore

,

this

situation seemingly leads them to feel anxious about their children.

However

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interactions and communications, which are based on

honesty

and

trust

.

Firstly

, individuals would place their

trust

in

honest

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person

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easily. Some of them would rather strike up their new

relationships

which are based on positive aspects

such

as

honesty

, kindness,

self- assurance

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rather than unimportant affairs since

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these determinate aspects of people’s character will lead to destroying their close relations.

As a result

,

honesty

and

trust

can improve and strengthen society’s affection.

Secondly

,

trust

apparently can decrease losing

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of important people because these interactions are made

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honesty

.

hence

,

this

suitable approach can keep harmony in order to have a more mutual understanding. In conclusion,

although

the most important purpose of

honesty

in

relationships

can put

trust

in each other and

also

fall fear of losing, dishonesty maybe lead to avoiding the judge and concern

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people’s bonds