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some beleive that blood is thicker than water. how far do you agree or disagree?

#beleive #blood #water
The expression “Blood is thicker than water” means
relationships
 with family members are more important than every other
relationships
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 and family members are closer to each other compared to friends. It implies that parents and siblings still support each other in difficult situations, even if they have the worst fights. On one hand, our family is important
parts
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 of our lives, because we have been with them since we entered
this
word
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 and
in addition
 to blood
tie
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, we have a strong emotional connection with them. So despite all the differences, the family members eventually make peace with each other for the benefit of the family and help each other when problems come up.
On the other hand
, we were not involved in choosing our family. It’s true that family is the
first
 society in which we grow up, but we need other
relationships
 for personal growth and development.
Furthermore
, considering uncertainties; not only experience but
also
 myths and history show that in the case of wealth and power, even urine could be thicker and stronger than blood! In my view, what is the most important is that you balance
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a variety of
relationships
. So don’t overestimate and rely on family
relationships
, nor underestimate friendships because we are all alone in
this
 world, after all.
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