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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The plans below show a student accommodation buildings 2010 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

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These plans illustrate how building for a demander accommodation was in 2010 and how it comes for now. It is clear from the graph that changed several parts inside
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 outside. According to what is shown, in the bast that section after the main entrance was bigger without using the Hallway in something useful.
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, the Hallway now came smaller with adds En-suite room with the old Students-bedroom in the upper right corner. While the middle left part of the main entrance has not changed, one student bedroom and bathroom.
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, the bathroom should share with all students in the building.
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, the cooking place and social area in the upper middle lane of the building beside the bast is just the kitchen.
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, the left corner was have had one students-bedroom and a living room but
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 constitute to be three bedrooms for them. To sum up, we could say that building cancelled the living room to extend the bed-rooms from three in the bast to five bed-rooms.
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, the garden was on two sides of the building and now it is on one way while the other side had become car barking.
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