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The government should allocate more fund to the educational sector than health sector. At what extent do you agree or disagree.

#government #fund #sector #health
The funding of both sectors is necessary
for
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 terms of development, but in
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 I will discuss the debate of the adequate funding
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 the educational sector than
of
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the
health
 sector The educational
district
 provides the necessary power of the knowledge one should have in order for a countries development
,
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 but
then
 comes the issue of the
energy
district
 which plays a major role in the
energy
 of a country, both the
district
play
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 an important role in development but to some
extent
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 the
health
 sector needs more funding due to the increasing prices and modern
health
 issues,
energy
 has always been a priority to all of the human race, and due to
rising
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biowar
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 like situation one should consider the
energy
 to be the most important when it comes to the question of
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 surviving the govt should rather focus on developing the
energy
district
 to improve the living and the betterment of the
health
 of the people , A legend once said "
energy
 is Wealth" , which properly defines the exact term of
energy
 being more important than anything , Education nowadays has become available very easily and everywhere , one does not need to attend schools in order to become successful in life, due to Internet the information has been on the fingertips of the people and widely available, which gives the well-being
zone
 more weightage than the educational
district
 to be considered more important to be funded The final words for
this
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i
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 support both
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zone
 as they are necessary but in terms of ,
importance
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 I disagree with allocating more funds to the educational
zone
 than to the well-being
zone
.
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