Many think that in today’s world it is very difficult for people to maintain a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, feel that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays some
people
stick to a healthy diet and lifestyle.
On the other hand
, others consider it with
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number of difficulties. In my opinion, being able to bear some hard work is worthy to reach a healthy soul and body. Many
people
obligate themselves
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used to a nourishing diet and daily exercise,
thus
, they have planned to live a life to the full and they already know, that an old habit dies hard. In the current
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it is not out of mind to find a proper online organic store, where
people
can order fresh meals and food with the least amount of additives and
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reasonable price. Under these circumstances preparing a hearty meal could be as easy as a click of
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.
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, attending
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has become recently really popular,
hence
gyms gave become easy to find in every quarter of a city.
On the other hand
, another group of
people
assume,
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junk food and ready meals is not only much tastier
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but
also
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take less time to get prepared.
Furthermore
, these processed foods are always available and easy to reach
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any store. I believe that
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in order to live a happy life far away from diseases
such
as cancer, diabetes,
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etc. it is necessary to allocate daily specific time for working out and preparing meals, and honestly in
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century thanks to online shops and even online
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coaches, these are neither unreachable goals, nor take
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amount of our daily time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • caloric intake
  • processed foods
  • dietary choices
  • fitness regimen
  • nutritional awareness
  • chronic diseases
  • preventative healthcare
  • lifestyle diseases
  • well-being
  • metabolic rate
  • food deserts
  • healthy eating habits
  • bioavailability
  • physical activity
  • body mass index (BMI)
  • cardiovascular health
  • mental resilience
  • exercise regimen
  • holistic lifestyle
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