The plans below shows a theatre in 2010 and 2012. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant

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The maps depict the comparison of cinema
center
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in two different periods 2010 and 2012. Overall, it is clear that many changes took place in
theatre
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a theatre
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in
given
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time period. In 2012 cinema was more spacious and facilitated as compared to 2010. Some places were reconstructed while others were constant and new. To commence with, space of dressing room decreased which is along with showers in North - West direction . Cafe converted into
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office.
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coordination
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room took place of
dressing
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room and storage
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by
admin
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office in
North - East
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direction .
Auditorium
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was located in the middle.
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Furthermore
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ticket office made a way for storage in the left bottom corner.
Restaurant
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was
new
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constructed.
Main
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door and stage
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constant in
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the given
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time period.
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