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It is important for children to learn the between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

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use to teach good behaviour
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children
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.In
this
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explain
 what sort of
punishment
 can be used by parents and teachers.
Firstly
,when
giving
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punishment
 for
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wrongdoings
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wrong doings
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 by
children
 it will create fear
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 it again.Because judgement is an action that
children
 hesitate or
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are subject
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 to do it again.
As a result
,it is used as a mechanism to distinguish right and wrong.
For example
,the research conducted in the USA revealed that when a child
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toward
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punishment
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create
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 a panic within them which prevent
it
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them
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 from not repeating the same mistake.
Secondly
,action speaks more than words which
children
 understand
it
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better.Since they are
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young age making them
to
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understand by words
are
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 difficult,so by providing
punishment
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,punishment
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 it will be easy for them to understand.
For instance
,the research conducted in
the
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India showed that
children
 understand it better by action not by words.
As of for the
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punishment
 that can be used by parents and teachers should be not harmful to the
children
.As many people will express their work pressure
towards
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 a child in a harmful way.
Additionally
,
punsihments
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punishments
punishment
 like doing leisure activities and giving impositions should be used.Since these are the things
children
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 to do it will make them
to
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fear and avoid doing wrong things. In conclusion,distinguishing correct and wrong is important for
children
 at an early age where
punsihment
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punishment
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right
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 things.As
punsihment
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punishment
 will create fear and better
to understand
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 for
children
 it is necessary to
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 them to the perfect beings.So I agree
to
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 the
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 statement.
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