Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at increasing sale. Others think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

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express the idea that advertising is an essential tool for growing sales. Whereas others guess that advertising has become so widespread we do not consider it anymore. I stick to the former view of

people

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who still value the role of

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because well-targeted and well-presented

ads

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still find their consumers. It is not a revelation that I say that

ads

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have become very common and can be found everywhere. On the one hand, sometimes we do not notice them because of their huge number. There are lots of cases that we pass by them without even taking a look at them. Many outdoor

ads

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can be a great example of the above-mentioned idea.

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is not because

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have become common, but because the target is not right chosen, and it has marketing problems.

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, I can not agree with the statement that they have lost their role. If we look in general, we can see that the special-designed and innovative

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are very noticeable. When we choose our right target and put it in the right place where it can find its consumers, it definitely will.

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, a lot of

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are so well-introduced that

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want to become a user of these items.

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, the

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of Coca-Cola and Pepsi are always competitive and interesting to be followed. And

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we should not underestimate the function of social

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, which discourage

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from bad habits or behaviours.

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, the very common one, the target of which is drivers. It illustrates how driving fast you danger not only yourself but your loved ones. To conclude, we can say that

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there are

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who believe that

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are so common that

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stopped observing them, the problem lies in the wrong product placement, bad targeting, and bad packaging.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

308 words

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