You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you inform you that that multifunctional black camera I bought at Rob's Store when I was travelling to Mexico on the 1st of February, is not accompanied by some items that James Milton, the local seller, informed me of. The camera sold should have 2 orange Bluetooth phones as described on its receipt.

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, when I opened up the box, there was just one, which made me feel sad, once the other one I would gift my mother.

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, I miss the 48Gb SD Card he told me I would gain in case of buying more than 60 dollars. Prior to buying

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gadget, I took his email to notify him if everything goes well, but I have emailed him a few times, but I have had no return. I hope it is not a scam and would appreciate knowing how the company will handle

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. I thereby would like to know how both of us can proceed with

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happening. As I am in Brazil now, coming back to Mexico City may not be affordable for me.

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, I might consider a refund plan to straighten up

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problem, but still open to other possibilities. I will look forward to hearing from you any time soon. Yours sincerely, Pedro Costa.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

217 words

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local representative
important items missing
purchase details
model and brand
missing accessories
inconvenience
use to its full extent
urgent request
partial refund
alternative solution
exchange unit
correct the issue
look forward to your prompt response

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