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some people think that goverment should spend on on railways while, others say that it is important to spending on public transport rather than railway lines. what do you extant

#people #goverment #railways #transport #railway #lines
Choosing between the two as to whether new railway lines for fast
trains
 be built or
exisiting
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existing
 rail transportation system should be improved as both are correlated. There are many factors to be considered to reach
to
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the conclusion which will be discussed below.
Although
,
fast moving
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trains
is
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are
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 the need of the hour in order to match the
fast paced
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 lives, the growing
digitilization
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digitalization
digitization
 of almost everything where people find it difficult to spend a lot of time in
one
 place. To do more than
one
 thing at
one
 time has become a part of
the
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human nature. Most of us want to spend less time
in
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travelling via slow
trains
, though there are options to travel by flight, but not all the cities are connected via flights,
secondly
, not each
one
 of us can afford the travel by
flights
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.
However
, just spending money on the construction of railways lines for
fast moving
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trains
 is not the solution if the existing rail transportation system is not improved. The two are
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interconnected
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inter connected
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interconnected
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 and
has
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 to be developed together to get the best of both.
Therefore
, looking at the
above mentioned
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 points, we can conclude that spending on either of the above options,
it
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has to be a
well thought
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 decision of the deciding authorities in order to spend the money wisely and in the right direction.
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