Consumer goods have become the most important part of people’s lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Nowadays, people pay more and more attention to the products they consume. Customers are reaping the benefits of these
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products, but they should Add a hyphen
time-saver
also
beware of the drawbacks that come along with the consumption of these goods
. This
essay shall discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of this
growing trend.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that consumerism is not only boosting the economy, it is also
improving the overall standard of living. This
is due to the increased demand for consumer
goods
that has created more and more jobs. Besides
that home appliances such
as washing machines help eliminate a daily household chore
that Fix the agreement mistake
chores
gives
people more time for relaxation and leisure. Wrong verb form
giving
For instance
, in VietNam, Samsung has invested a total $
17,7 billion USD with 6 factories and 110,000 employees.
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of $
On the other hand
, materialism has created bad habits which have negatively impacted people’s lives. Family members now often have less communication face to face than they did before. This
is due to Correct article usage
the dependencies
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dependency
of
electronic devices Change preposition
on
such
as smartphones, laptops and iPads. For
example
parents and their children could be sitting together in a room, but they are totally separate from each otherAdd a comma
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,
because they all are busy with their online communication. Remove the comma
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In addition
, they are heavily relying on consumer
entertainment goods
. This
may lead people to become less active which can have negative consequences such
as obesity, diabetes and overall poor general health.
In conclusion, the increased demand for consumer
goods
is actually a double edged
sword. There are some benefits Add a hyphen
double-edged
such
as a higher standard of living and a better overall economy. However
, there are also
some drawbacks such
as a lesser family connection and negative health aspects. Overall, it was clear to me that the consumption of consumer
goods
does outweigh the harmful effects.Submitted by viet.phamtan on
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