It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?
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do not hurt their mentality.I believe any punishment relies on their mannersSubmitted by zhadyra.serikbayeva2016 on
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