Nowadays, there are more opportunities for women than there were in the past. Some people think this situation has cause more problems than it has solved. What are your opinions on this?

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It is my pleasure to write to you as a show of interest in the position of a Registered Nurse as advertised by your
Trust
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. I am a vibrant, innovative,
respectful
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, Responsible,
Self motivated
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and Courageous Registered Nurse with about 2 years of experience in General Medical Wards, Surgical
ward
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wards
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, Outpatient
clinic
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clinics
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, Pediatrics, Accident & Emergency, and Ophthalmology without direct supervision. I
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and I am a certified Basic Life Support (BLS) carer and Emergency
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Provider (ECP). I have started
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UK application process and have gotten my decision letter/Authorization to Test for OSCE having done my IELTS exam and successfully completed part one NMC Test of Competence (CBT) in September 2021 and October 2021 respectively. I am applying for the post of a Registered nurse in your NHS
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because I want to be part of
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goal driven
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and client conscious
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that is
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passionate about delivering quality healthcare to
patients
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. Particularly, I am excited
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the core values of your NHS
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as they are personal and dear to me and it will be a great
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to have myself associated with them. As regards my
Skills
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and Abilities, I am well known by my current employer and colleagues as a
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player, Caring, Committed, Competent, Proactive, Diligent, Health educator, Skilled in the administration of intravenous medication, Displayed professional ethics in relating with
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, Proper documentation and
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, Auditing, Venipuncture, Good interpersonal
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centered
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care
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, Excellent I.T
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, Ability to learn new
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and adapt to change, Risk management potential, Ability to stay calm and perform under pressure, Time management among others. I am able to render total nursing
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to
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, Prioritize
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, Keep
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information confidential, perform well within a multi-disciplinary
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, giving high quality and outstanding
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to
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. In my current role as a Nursing
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I have experienced working
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a medical and surgical adult ward, having nursed
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with conditions
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attended to Medical-Surgical Emergencies
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members to take
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of numerous
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of
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with various health challenges successfully. Responsible for assessing, planning, implementing and evaluating
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for a specific group of
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. Undertaking comprehensive health
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assessment of
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and reassigning as appropriate with good use of available resources and management, Maintaining
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and clean environment while carrying out procedures. These and more are my strengths and talents which I would love to
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender equality
  • social justice
  • economic development
  • innovation
  • traditional family roles
  • shared responsibilities
  • diverse perspectives
  • creativity
  • decision-making
  • educational opportunities
  • work-life balance
  • traditionalists
  • societal friction
  • gender roles
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