The key to solving environmental problems is for the present generation to sacrifice their convenient way of life for sake of future generations. Do you agree or this disagree with this statement?

These days, confronting the environmental concern is a

individuals

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moral

responsibilities

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in the whole world. There is a common belief that solving the environmental problems is in charge of

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current

generation

to spend their life to save it for a new

generation

. While

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many say that the future

generation

is responsible to protect it.

Although

there are arguments on both sides, I strongly disagree that the present

generation

sacrifices their convenient life for sake of

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generation

. There are convincing arguments in favour of solving environmental

issues

by the current

generation

.

Firstly

, they can try to be more environmentally friendly. Individuals who are living in the recent era can utilize

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more renewable resources rather than non-renewable ones because of saving energy for

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the future

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.

In other words

, people could replace eco-friendly vehicles with petrol-driven cars. Take

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electric vehicles as an example, means of transportation will reduce to use

fossil

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fuels so that the future

generation

will apparently utilize them as raw materials in

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of other items like plastic.

As a result

, the present

generation

would be effective to remedy the environmental controversy and protect it with changing in their life way.

Secondly

, the present

generation

can utilize less harmful gadgets

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environment

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. If people use less harmful items which are led to environmental degradation, it will solve some environmental

issues

.

For instance

, farmers in developed countries have been utilizing heavy machinery like tractors to cultivate, resulting in soil erosion and compacting.

This

method could be changed in order to solve some environmental

issues

.

However

, it is predicted that

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solving environmental problems by

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generation

will be done.

first

and foremost, they will apparently present innovative and creative

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ways

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to confront

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environmental

issues

. Simply put, they would present innovative

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and invent cutting edge

gadget

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to solve environmental

issues

.

For example

,

next

people would invent the innovative method which

turn

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water into oil containing

less

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the less

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harmful chemical

substance

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substances

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.

In addition

, raising

next

generation

awareness. these

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communities

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can

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effective contribute to

solve

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environmental

issues

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if they educate correctly.

For instance

,

educational

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institution

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institutions

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in Canada,

are

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taking

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course aimed to raise young

adults

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awareness to prevent environmental

degradations

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. In conclusion,

although

the current

generation

plays a crucial role to solve environmental

issues

,

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next-generation

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next

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generation

would contribute positively because of their new invention and awareness.