We have been living in the nuclear age now for over half a century. Since the first atomic bombs were developed, nuclear technology has provided governments with the ability to totally destroy the planet. Yet the technology has been put to positive use as an energy source and in certain areas of medicine. To what extent is nuclear technology a a danger to life on Earth? What are the benefits and risks assoicated with its use?
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Human has been keeping on continuous searching and developing numerous ways to establish
safety
and security of each nation by producing different nuclear weapons and Correct article usage
the safety
save
it for their future survival. Wrong verb form
saving
However
, nuclear technology has a huge hazard
effect on living things on Earth. And I will discuss its beneficial factor and possible negative effects with its usage in the ensuing paragraphs.
On the one hand, Replace the word
hazardous
nuclear
weapon will totally destruct the Earth whenever conflicts Add an article
the nuclear
arises
between nations. Change the verb form
arise
Such
as war
between Russia and Ukraine, other countries are affirmative of their safety and security since they owned an excellent weapon that could protect their Correct article usage
the war
Correct your spelling
border
boarder
and invasion would be prevented. Correct your spelling
border
Thus
, either of this
two countries will suffer once they pull the trigger to release the atomic bomb against the other party. Not only Correct determiner usage
these
the
humankind will vanish as well Correct article usage
apply
as
the entire place.
Correct word choice
apply
On the other hand
, nuclear technology is crucial to healthcare
system Add an article
the healthcare
which
Correct word choice
because
it
could help diagnose and heal any form of critical Correct pronoun usage
apply
diseases
Fix the agreement mistake
disease
such
as cancer. Although
it plays a vital role in the
medicine, it would destroy the normal cells in the body since it is the most potent form of radiation. Correct article usage
apply
Consequently
, people might have the
positive outcome but not all will survive; Correct article usage
a
especialy
those elders that could not stand the process of diagnostic procedures, Correct your spelling
especially
eventualy
the rate of mortality will Correct your spelling
eventually
increased
. As well as the side effects of radiation Change the verb form
increase
to
the health care workers who are regularly exposed Change preposition
on
on
the equipment, in the long Change preposition
to
run
human life will Add the comma(s)
,run
be place
Change the verb form
be placed
on
Change preposition
in
distinction
.
In summary, nuclear technology is imperative for the safety and security of different nations as well as it helps mankind to heal diseases Add an article
the distinction
however
, the side effects are extremely dangerous to both living things and planet Earth.Submitted by maymosqueda on
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