You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter - explain why you think you would be suitable for the job, - say what else you could do for the family, - give your reasons for wanting the job

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Geoffrey. My name is Jane, I am an international student studying at the University of Sydney and I am writing

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letter to express my interest in becoming a

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language teacher for your two

children

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. I believe I am a qualified candidate and I believe I have the ability to teach

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Chinese

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effectively, which means that your

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can master a

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in a matter of months rather than years. I am confident because I am a high-achieving student with a 3.75 GPA and I was able to learn Spanish in 6 months.

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, I have six months' experience teaching

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to an 8-year-old girl who quickly mastered "pinyin", or pronunciation and grammar. Apart from teaching

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good at singing.

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, if I am hired, I can

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teach your child to sing

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songs, which is a fun way to learn a language. -

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a fun way to learn a language. The main reason I want

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job is

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I feel I am a good fit for the position and I like being with

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I don't care about the salary,

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job will help me pay off my student loans. I look forward to hearing from you! Jane

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

217 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

TESOL certification
Experience in teaching children
Knowledge of Australian culture
Passion for language education
Flexible and adaptable
Design customized lesson plans
Patient and understanding
Strong communication skills
Interpersonal skills
Participate in family activities
Enthusiasm for cultural exchange

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