You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter - explain why you think you would be suitable for the job, - say what else you could do for the family, - give your reasons for wanting the job

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Dear

Mr.

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and

Mrs.

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Mrs

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Geoffrey. My name is Jane, I am an international student studying at the University of Sydney and I am writing

this

letter to express my interest in becoming a

Chinese

language teacher for your two

children

. I believe I am a qualified candidate and I believe I have the ability to teach

children

Chinese

effectively, which means that your

children

can master a

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in a matter of months rather than years. I am confident because I am a high-achieving student with a 3.75 GPA and I was able to learn Spanish in 6 months.

In addition

, I have six months' experience teaching

Chinese

to an 8-year-old girl who quickly mastered "pinyin", or pronunciation and grammar. Apart from teaching

Chinese

, I am

also

good at singing.

Therefore

, if I am hired, I can

also

teach your child to sing

Chinese

songs, which is a fun way to learn a language. -

This

also

a fun way to learn a language. The main reason I want

this

job is

because

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I feel I am a good fit for the position and I like being with

children

Also

although

I don't care about the salary,

this

job will help me pay off my student loans. I look forward to hearing from you! Jane

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

217 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

TESOL certification
Experience in teaching children
Knowledge of Australian culture
Passion for language education
Flexible and adaptable
Design customized lesson plans
Patient and understanding
Strong communication skills
Interpersonal skills
Participate in family activities
Enthusiasm for cultural exchange

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