In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, as result of
a technological developments
, smart technologies become a part of our lives. Correct the article-noun agreement
technological development
Self drive
Add a hyphen
Self-drive
vehicles
are one of them and they are on the roads under the supervision of the drivers.Some people believe that in the common future, cars will be fully driverless
.This
essay will demonstrate the advantages
and disadvantages
and will argue that the advantages
of driverless
vehicles
outweigh the disadvantages
.
Two main advantages
of driverless
vehicles
are saving time
and human mistakes.Firstly
we all spend our time
travelling to work or home or somewhere else. Traffic can be a nightmare sometimes and we lose our time
on the weel. Yet, if driverless
cars come into our lives, we can change the situation to our advantage. For instance
, we can do our work in traffic without caring about using Add an article
the vehicle
a vehicle
vehicle
.Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
Additionally
, we can avoid human being mistakes.We all see many accidents on the roads.Usually, these crashes caused
by human mistakes. With Add a missing verb
are caused
driverless
vehicles
, we can minimize the proportion of accidents on the roads.
However
, there are some disadvantages
of
Change preposition
to
driverless
vehicles
.The first
and biggest disadvantage of driverless
vehicles
is people's
Change noun form
people
who
will be unemployed.A bad effect of Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
smart technologies Correct article usage
apply
are
people who will be unemployed. Computers Correct subject-verb agreement
is
take
people’s places. Correct your spelling
make
For example
with a ındustry 4.0 robots take people’s places in the factories and these factory numbers are increasing day by day.
To conclude, technology comes with lots of benefits and driverless
vehicles
are one of them.We can save time
with reduce the accidents with driverless
vehicles
. However
, there are some disadvantages
like increasing unemployment numbers.I believe that the advantages
of driverless
vehicles
outweigh the disadvantages
.Submitted by sencan-58 on
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