In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, as result of
a technological developments
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, smart technologies become a part of our lives.
Self drive
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vehicles
are one of them and they are on the roads under the supervision of the drivers.Some people believe that in the common future, cars will be fully
driverless
.
This
essay will demonstrate the
advantages
and
disadvantages
and will argue that the
advantages
of
driverless
vehicles
outweigh the
disadvantages
. Two main
advantages
of
driverless
vehicles
are saving
time
and human mistakes.
Firstly
we all spend our
time
travelling to work or home or somewhere else. Traffic can be a nightmare sometimes and we lose our
time
on the weel. Yet, if
driverless
cars come into our lives, we can change the situation to our advantage.
For instance
, we can do our work in traffic without caring about using
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the vehicle
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vehicle
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vehicles
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.
Additionally
, we can avoid human being mistakes.We all see many accidents on the roads.Usually, these crashes
caused
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by human mistakes. With
driverless
vehicles
, we can minimize the proportion of accidents on the roads.
However
, there are some
disadvantages
of
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driverless
vehicles
.The
first
and biggest disadvantage of
driverless
vehicles
is
people's
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people
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who
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apply
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will be unemployed.A bad effect of
the
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apply
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smart technologies
are
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is
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people who will be unemployed. Computers
take
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make
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people’s places.
For example
with a ındustry 4.0 robots take people’s places in the factories and these factory numbers are increasing day by day. To conclude, technology comes with lots of benefits and
driverless
vehicles
are one of them.We can save
time
with reduce the accidents with
driverless
vehicles
.
However
, there are some
disadvantages
like increasing unemployment numbers.I believe that the
advantages
of
driverless
vehicles
outweigh the
disadvantages
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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