The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns ad cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often believed by many people that
significant
Correct article usage
a significant
show examples
rising in online
shoppig
Correct your spelling
shopping
can negatively impact
upon
Change preposition
apply
show examples
local shops;
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
show examples
will no longer open. I,agree as much as disagree with
this
notion. My position is justified
further
with reasons and examples. To commence, the foremost argument to justify my stance is online shopping is
more
Add an article
a more
show examples
convenient way to purchase
anykind
Correct your spelling
any kind
of goods.
This
means
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
it is true that owing to advanced technologies it can be possible to purchase online without going anywhere. There are myriad
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
website
Fix the agreement mistake
websites
show examples
and applications
are
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
available on
internet
Correct article usage
the internet
show examples
by which mankind can order various items.
Additionally
, it is
cost effective
Add a hyphen
cost-effective
show examples
.
This
is because, in online
shoppig
Correct your spelling
shopping
, people can obtain
not
Add an article
a not
show examples
only huge
discount
Fix the agreement mistake
discounts
show examples
but
also
save their time. As
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
the free delivery is available at our time
Submitted by dipendharmani786 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: