If students were given the choice between “not to study” and “study” most of the time they would choose “not to study”. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement.

It is stated that if pupils have a chance to choose

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or not, they prefer to select the latter. I

am partially agree

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due to some factors, which will be

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discussed in

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with, there are

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number of reasons for

students

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to decide not to

study

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. What tops the chart not academic is financial problems. Education is quite costly. By way of illustration, if children want to

study

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, they need a lot of learning tools and books. Not an example

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, tuitions in some special schools are so high that most families cannot afford them.

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, some

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focus on the academic part and

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important thing

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as practical

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can gain outside the school that

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are

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important factors like what? for real life. Many ideas/ uns/und

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a myriad of factors that help

students

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decide to continue their education

that

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the most important

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factor is future career future prospects. Education helps people to provide who? with an opportunity to find a better job

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as medicine, engineering and teachers need to

academic

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qualification.

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, today,

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has become easier and more attractive with the presence of technology and the internet. To conclude, I think because of mentioned reasons

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can prefer

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or not

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study

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daniel.galexy

Apr 28, 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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4 paragraphs

227 words

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to stops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

You have recently moved to a different city for work, but you want to maintain contact with a friend from your previous workplace. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •describe the city you moved to; •tell him/her about your new job; •invite him/her to visit you.

Some people believe that the government should financially support retired people. Others feels that those who have retired should pay to support themselves. Discuss both these points and give your own opinion.

Write a letter to the hotel manager to inform, you are coming with a group of people to have a business meeting at his hotel. - Introduce yourself and the group. - Tell about the business meeting. - Inform if accommodation is necessary.