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Some people argue that arts, such as paintings and music, are a waste of money and the government should spend this money on other public services. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.?

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Some
people
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 suggest that the government should not spend
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 on the
arts
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 sector
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 as music and paintings,
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 of it, the budget should be applied to other public services. I tend to disagree with
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 statement because in my way of thinking investing in
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 is the same to invest in the tourism sector.
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, art not only allows
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 to express themselves but
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 helps them to develop creativity.
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 with, if the government spends
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 on the
arts
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, especially on music and museums part of the
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 might be recovered. Since, promoting
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 as
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 shows and traditional
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 would make a city more attractive to tourists.
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, the economy of the city will be stronger.
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, here in Brazil Carnaval is one of the most popular
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 that we have and, the government spends a lot of
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 helping the parades of samba schools happen.
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, is widely known that a huge part of the
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 previously invested is recovered by tourists from other cities,
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 other sectors
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 as hotels and restaurants usually make more
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 and have more job opportunities during the period of the event. Moving to another reason, spending
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 on
arts
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 should never be considered a waste of
money
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. Because in the art
people
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 tend to express their feelings and develop creativity. One of the best
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 of it could be rap music, where musicians usually transform their life and reality into lyrics and all listeners can learn from a different perspective.
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,
arts
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such
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 as dance streets
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 could be an effective way of let adolescents and children away from crime. In conclusion,
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 it is important to invest resources in other public services the
money
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 spent on
arts
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 could be recovered by promoting public
events
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.
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, in my view, it is crucial allow to
people
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 the opportunity to express themselves and their realities as we could learn from them.
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