The invention of the Smartphone marks a crucial turning point in innovation, becoming the most necessary item on everyone’s list. Today, it is rare to see a person without one, constantly entering data and searching for information. However, while it is a social milestone, the Smartphone is also responsible for a changing culture. Please share your perspectives on this topic and discuss your views on the subject from both a personal and professional perspective
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Nowadays, in our life, there is a lot of evolution, but the most important evolution is the
Smartphone. That's why almost everybody has a phone.
Thischange has a lot of advantages but
alsodisadvantages that depend on the point of view. In my opinion
smartphoneswith a healthy usage can our
societymore positive influence as negative. On the one hand, the
useas a good object in a lot of situations. What I mean is that
smartphonescan save people's lives in difficult situations.
For instance, a friend a long time ago was alone in the forest because he wanted to take a hike. though bad weather my friend didn't cut find his way back to his car and he was stuck. He call the emergency number and try to explain his situation and through his phone enabled the emerging guardian to find him.
That iswhy I think that
smartphonesare good for
On the other hand,
smartphonesbring many addictions to
society. Children and adults of all ages
smartphonesall the time and do not communicate with each other.
For example, my son acts like a zombie when he is on his
smartphoneand I try to speak to him or communicate with him.
That isthe negative side that the
smartphonebrings to our
society. But when we learn
thisitem right we can avoid those art addictions in our children or
society. To conclude, the
smartphonecan influence our lives negatively or positively. But
thisrevolutionary item can help us in difficult situations and we can learn to
useit in a healthy way in order to avoid addiction in our children and
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