The invention of the Smartphone marks a crucial turning point in innovation, becoming the most necessary item on everyone’s list. Today, it is rare to see a person without one, constantly entering data and searching for information. However, while it is a social milestone, the Smartphone is also responsible for a changing culture. Please share your perspectives on this topic and discuss your views on the subject from both a personal and professional perspective

Nowadays, in our

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, there is a lot of evolution, but the most important evolution is the

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. That's why almost everybody has a phone.

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change has a lot of advantages but

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disadvantages that depend on the point of view. In my

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healthy usage can our

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positive influence as

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On the one hand, the

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as a good object in a lot of situations. What I mean is that

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can save people's lives in difficult situations.

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, a friend a long time ago was alone in the forest because he wanted to take a hike.

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my friend didn't

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find his way back to his car

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he was stuck. He

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the emergency number and

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to explain his situation

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through his phone enabled the

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guardian to find him.

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why I think that

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are good for

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,

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bring many addictions to

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. Children and adults of all ages

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smartphones

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all the time and do not communicate with each other.

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, my son acts like a zombie when he is on his

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and

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I try to speak to him or communicate with him.

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the negative side that the

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brings to our

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. But when we learn

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we can avoid those art addictions in our children or

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, the

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of a

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can influence our lives negatively or positively. But

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revolutionary item can help us in difficult situations

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and we can learn to

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it in a healthy way in order to avoid addiction in our children and

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