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Some are of the opinion that people are naturally born as good leaders while others feel that leadership skills can be learned. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

#people #leaders #leadership #skills
Over the past decade,
Leader
 abilities had never failed to draw attention and provoke debates. The public shares
this
 opinion that
leader
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 skills are natural when you were born while some
people
 suppose that
the
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human can lead through curriculums. Henceforth I agree with both ideas and give the reason
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this
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below. On the one hand, some
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research
 witness that some
people
 perform capacity of leading in school years.It
clear
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 that the viewers tend to review through teamwork as well as possible.
For example
,
people
 co-operation flexibility in
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the group
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group
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 for
presentation
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presentations
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 in front of
class
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. But they need someone who
willing
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 to appoint roles to share
job
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 and over the time of performances.
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,
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human has own opinions and ideas in
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 in lectures which create dealing with work yourself.
On the other hand
, leaders are improved by lessons in class. In fact, the
people
 have to push out of the
hoziron
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hot iron
 of political and life knowledge in the hope of giving them more
opportunites
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opportunities
 in being
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a leader
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leader
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.
For instance
, in Vietnam, you can see some schools which educate skills, acquirements and gash of knowledge for business. In the term of university years, not only the student learns subjects,
finds
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 out the ways of presentation in emotion, body language and even report performance. In
conclude
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, I share
with
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both
opinion
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 that you might be a good
leader
 when you
born
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.But you can break out to be mature in
first
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 step to
became
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leader
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a leader
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 in the future through real experiences .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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