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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree?

#computers #education #role #teachers #classroom
In
this
 modern era, technology plays a vital
role
. Because of
this
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 some people believe that soon
teachers
 will be replaced by
computers
 in the classrooms.
However
 in my opinion no gadgets can play the valuable
role
 of
teachers
 in any educational
institutions
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. A mentor is a
role
 model who guides and
nurture
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 the
children
 to achieve their desired goals.
Teachers
 not only help
students
 by providing knowledge but they contribute
in
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to
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overall
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the overall
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 development of an individual. Undoubtedly,
computers
 are
rich
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a rich
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 and good source of knowledge. They are very resourceful and
students
 can easily access information from them but it
doesnt
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doesn't
 contribute
in
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to
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social
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the social
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 and
psycological
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psychological
 development of
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the child
a child
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child
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children
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. A school is an institution where
teachers
 impart
knowlege
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knowledge
 as well as help in
behaviour
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the behaviour
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 modification of a child. They not only teach
children
 but
also
 guide them to become
a
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good
person
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people
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 as
children
 are the building blocks of our society. A mentor helps to discover hidden talent in
students
 and helps them in pertaining towards
right
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the right
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 direction and no technology or computer can do that. Other than
this
computers
 have many detrimental effects on
health
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the health
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 of
students
.
Children
now a days
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nowadays
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 are using
computers
 profoundly and spend
lot
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a lot
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 of time on them and if they will be used in classrooms
instead
 of
teachers
, it will
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affect
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effect
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affect
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 their health as more screen time is not beneficial for them.
For
instance
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 a study was conducted on
effects
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the effects
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 of
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the computer
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computer
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computers
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 on
health
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the health
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 of
students
in
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at
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 Manipal university in India. More
then
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than
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 half of the participants reported
musculoskeleton
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musculoskeletal
 problems, sleep disorders and psychological problems due to
overuse
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the overuse
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 of
computers
 and laptops. So considering
this
 we should use gadgets but in
limited
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a limited
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 range. Educational institutes run with the guidance of
teachers
 and no one can deny their
role
 in
this
. To summarize, in my
opinion
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 none of the technology
however
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,however
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, advanced it may be can not take the
role
 of
teachers
 in the schools,
university
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universities
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 or colleges. After parents, the
teachers
 are the ones who mould and inspire the
students
 to achieve their dreams and goals.
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