IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 6.5

many people are give that in order to improve educational quality high school students should be encouraged to question and offer criticism on their teachers.Others think this will lead to a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom discuss both sides and give your own views.

#people #quality #school #students #offer #criticism #teachers #loss #respect #discipline #classroom
it is believed by some that learners should be taught to raise their
concern
Fix the agreement mistake
concerns
show examples
 and criticize while learning in order to upgrade the educational system.
However
,others find it
Correct article usage
an
show examples
undesirable and negative move, as it may cause disrespect of
teachers
 and indiscipline in the classroom. Even though
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
 asking doubts without hesitation can somewhere prove troublesome, I completely loud
it's
Correct your spelling
its
show examples
 overall advantages and
favour
Change the verb form
favours
show examples
 it. On the one hand,
freedom
Correct article usage
the freedom
show examples
 of clearing the questions of scholars sometimes
create
Correct subject-verb agreement
creates
show examples
 and
you
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
disturbance and distraction in the study room.
This
 is because, lobbies of
non serious
Add a hyphen
non-serious
show examples
students
 are more likely to put
an important queries
Correct the article-noun agreement
an important query
important queries
show examples
 for the sake of creating
humor
Change the spelling
humour
show examples
, as they are aware that their
teachers
 are bound to respond. Above all, chances are greater that they can put wrong allegations on their educators for not satisfying their doubts
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
 if they have had any record of punishment. One
such
 case
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
surfaced in Calcutta when,according to FIR,our teacher committed suicide as he was harassed and disrespected by his
students
 for not being capable of using a smart class screen.
On the other hand
, I feel that questioning is the basic right of education. Undoubtedly, when anyone learns something, he is more likely to be sceptical about certain facts which can only be eradicated by asking more and more.
Thus
, suffice to say, being vocal during class time bills confidence which
further
 leads to success.
Secondly
, interrogation helps
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
strengthening
Wrong verb form
strengthen
show examples
 the bond between
teachers
 and
students
. Since
students
' involvement motivates
teachers
 to go beyond their limitations,
as
Correct word choice
apply
show examples
it proves that
teachers
 are being heard and understood. So, in a way, in order to build a healthy relationship, learners ought to be liberal
to
Change preposition
in
show examples
 put questions while
study
Replace the word
studying
show examples
 time. In conclusion, despite having some chances of arguments and negativity in the classroom,
students
 should be free to reveal their problems in front of their tutors due to fact that it gives
them
Correct your spelling
the
show examples
opportunity
Add an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
show examples
 to learn profoundly and boosts their self-esteem.
Submitted by lvpreetxsmax on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: