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The plans below show the layout of the ground floor of a museum in 1990 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given
museum
's map indicates the changes on the ground floor from 1990 to 2010. Overall,
this
museum
 contained more facilities,
although
 some main rooms had not been removed. In 1990,
this
museum
 contained two
history
 rooms: a local
history
room
 at the right-down corner and a natural
history
room
 at the right. An archaeology gallery was above the local
history
room
, and a gift shop and a statue beside it were in the left-top corner. There were stairs at the end of the
museum
 near the statue in front of the entrance. The
museum
 office and reception counter were on the left side of the entrance door. After 20 years, a children's interaction zone and a poster display area were located
instead
 of the gallery. The gift shop was extended, which included a café inside it.
However
, these size changes had relocated the statue to the middle of the
museum
. A lift had conducted between the empty place of the shop and the natural
history
room
. The entrance door had been wider than before and faced the reception counter, which had rotated to the right.
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