You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Group or team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are done alone. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
Works
which are done by group
or Correct article usage
a group
team
bring more valuable skills
for life
to people
than those are done by oneself. There are several advantages and disadvantages of both sides. Although
some people
think that works
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work
done
alone show more value, I believe that Add the auxiliary verb
are done
team
works
teach
us more important Correct subject-verb agreement
teaches
skills
.
To begin
with, one person
assignment needs more knowledge to complete the whole Change noun form
person's
work
. For example
, it is impossible for a freshman who does not know how to write python finish
a python assignment. Fix the infinitive
to finish
However
, if this
assignment is a
Correct article usage
apply
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teamwork
team
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teamwork
work
, ones can even rely on members
who are good at python and he or she can just present the project on the stage. Furthermore
, since it is a single work
, the one who has to take full responsible
Replace the word
responsibility
of
Change preposition
for
this
work
, whereas in
Add the comma(s)
,in
group
work
, all of the team
members
can share the reponsibility
. Though there are several merits Correct your spelling
responsibility
on
doing activities alone, those Change preposition
to
skills
which are developed in process
are not Correct article usage
the process
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quite
quit
useful in Correct your spelling
quite
life
.
On the other hand
, the most valuable skill of Correct your spelling
teamwork
team
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teamwork
work
is cooperating with others. We are group
animals; therefore
, it is inevitable that we need to learn how to interact with other individuals. For instance
, when I entered the university, we had many group
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groups
works
to do in every course. The most memorable was that once we were going to investigate the habit of different citizens of riding scooter
. After we collected all the investigations, one of our Fix the agreement mistake
scooters
team
members
could not imagine why people
in Taipei would move their scooter
to cross the pedestrian on foot since Fix the agreement mistake
scooters
people
in southern Taiwan would just ride on the pedestrian. At that time, I realized not all of
the Change preposition
apply
people
share same
Add an article
the same
value
. Once we cannot agree with each other, it might Fix the agreement mistake
values
results
in Change the verb form
result
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argument
arguement
. Correct article usage
an arguement
Moreover
, Correct your spelling
teamwork
team
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teamwork
work
can develope
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develop
ones
leadership which is valuable in Change to a genitive case
one's
life
. Take managers for
example, a good manager can put Add the comma(s)
,for
team
members
in their right positions and make their team
keep accelerating. This
skill can only be developed in group
works
.
To sum up, there are many benefits and drawbacks of Fix the agreement mistake
work
team
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teamwork
work
and single work
, but I believe that the upwards of group
works
outweigh the downwards. Furthermore
, we can learn more valuable skills
for life
from having Correct your spelling
teamwork
team
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teamwork
work
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Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.