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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Group or team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are done alone. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

#minutes #topic #group #team #activities #skills #life
Works
 which are done by
group
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 or
team
 bring more valuable
skills
 for
life
 to
people
 than those are done by oneself. There are several advantages and disadvantages of both sides.
Although
 some
people
 think that
works
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work
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done
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are done
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 alone show more value, I believe that
team
works
teach
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teaches
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 us more important
skills
.
To begin
 with, one
person
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person's
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 assignment needs more knowledge to complete the whole
work
.
For example
, it is impossible for a freshman who does not know how to write python
finish
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 a python assignment.
However
, if
this
 assignment is
a
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apply
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teamwork
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team
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work
, ones can even rely on
members
 who are good at python and he or she can just present the project on the stage.
Furthermore
, since it is a single
work
, the one who has to take full
responsible
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of
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for
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this
work
, whereas
in
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group
work
, all of the
team
members
 can share the
reponsibility
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responsibility
. Though there are several merits
on
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to
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 doing activities alone, those
skills
 which are developed in
process
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the process
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 are not
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quite
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quit
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quite
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 useful in
life
.
On the other hand
, the most valuable skill of
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teamwork
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team
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teamwork
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work
 is cooperating with others. We are
group
 animals;
therefore
, it is inevitable that we need to learn how to interact with other individuals.
For instance
, when I entered the university, we had many
group
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groups
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works
 to do in every course. The most memorable was that once we were going to investigate the habit of different citizens of riding
scooter
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scooters
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. After we collected all the investigations, one of our
team
members
 could not imagine why
people
 in Taipei would move their
scooter
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scooters
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 to cross the pedestrian on foot since
people
 in southern Taiwan would just ride on the pedestrian. At that time, I realized not all
of
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the
people
 share
same
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the same
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value
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values
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. Once we cannot agree with each other, it might
results
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result
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 in
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argument
arguement
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an arguement
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.
Moreover
,
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teamwork
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team
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teamwork
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work
 can
develope
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develop
ones
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one's
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 leadership which is valuable in
life
. Take managers
for
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,for
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 example, a good manager can put
team
members
 in their right positions and make their
team
 keep accelerating.
This
 skill can only be developed in
group
works
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work
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. To sum up, there are many benefits and drawbacks of
team
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teamwork
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work
 and single
work
, but I believe that the upwards of
group
works
 outweigh the downwards.
Furthermore
, we can learn more valuable
skills
 for
life
 from having
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team
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work
.
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