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People today increasingly use credit cards to make monthly purchases. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, the number of
people
 who use
credit
cards
 to buy products rises a lot. It is usual to observe that almost every adult has at least one
credit
 card. There are several pros and cons
of
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 using
credit
cards
.
First
 of all, with
credit
cards
,
people
 can buy many goods that they desire.
This
 means that they can borrow some money to pay for the stuff
first
 and pay the bill in the future.
Moreover
, since most of the
cards
 have
bonus
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 feedback system,
people
 can acquire
2
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% of
bonus
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 from the bank.
However
, some
people
 may not aware of the period to pay the bill. Under
this
 circumstance, they would be punished by the bank and need to pay more
next
 month with
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% interest rate. As long as
ones
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 indulge in
this
 routine, it is hard for
people
 to get out of
this
high interest
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 rate and would create more debt in the future.
In addition
, because the inflation rate keeps increasing, the value of
same
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fiet
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fiat
feet
 money will become less in the future.
Therefore
, buying products with
credit
cards
 actually is a wise shopping method. For me, the value of 100 dollars now is more valuable than the value of 100 dollars after one month.
However
, there is an
exception
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 country, Japan. Japan is the only
coutry
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country
 in the world that always suffering deflation, so I recommend that
Japanese
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 should shop
by
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 cash.
Last
 but not least,
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many countries, they use the
credit
 point system to calculate citizens'
credit
 and banks would issue loans according to customers'
credit
 points. Specifically, owning a
credit
 card can add
credit
 points to
people
. Undoubtedly, we all need
credit
 points to help lower our loans. To sum up,
although
 there are several downwards of having
credit
cards
, I think the merits outweigh the demerits. Without owning them, we would lose many things.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cashless transactions
  • Financial footprint
  • Interest rates
  • Credit score
  • Consumerism
  • Debt accumulation
  • Expenditure tracking
  • Fraudulent activities
  • Overspending
  • Purchase protection
  • Revolving credit
  • Creditworthiness
  • Impulse buying
  • Secured credit card
  • Unsecured credit card
  • Spending limit
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