In many countries, plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish. They cause water and land pollution, and so they should be banned. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Environmental pollution is one of the most serious

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which it is human-induced.

Although

this

situation depends on various factors, especially

plastic

bags

are common pollutants

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nature.

However

, these materials are very hard to dispense in nature and

its

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residues are to remain in soil and

water

without decomposing. Naturally, all these scientific facts render that

plastic

-based

bags

are not allowed to use

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today. There are a lot of scientific studies which they prove that

plastic

bags

are

hazard

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for

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the natural habitat. A study that was conducted, in 2018, by Toronto University showed that the level of microplastic residues in

water

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had been at peril point. Another result of

this

situation was that tiny

plastic

particules

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particles

had been found in

circular

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system of marine animals. Unfortunately,

this

deteroriation

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deterioration

determination

for

water

habitat will bring about a

massively

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extinction. On the other side,

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effects of

plastic

bags

are not limited excluding

water

as well. As another example is

about

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plants which

they

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have a quite important position. As it is well known, plants are

key

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element

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which they make the

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lives

lifes

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it

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possible. What is more, since

all natural

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systems are connected with each other

such

as aqua and ground ecosystem, to be broken

this

cycle or harmed in some cases will

threat

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the plant

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life

lives

lifes

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. In case of being erased the plant types,

as a result

of overmuch using

plastic

bags

, will emerge

permanantly

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permanently

damages

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human-being. To recapitulate, it is a necessity to be banned

plastic

bags

use.

Also

, it will be a reasonable activity to be researched

plastic

alternatives. As a promising approach, it is expected to be used the bio

metarials

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materials

instead

of

plastic

in order to save our world.