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In a number of countries some people think that it is necessary to spend large sums of money constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe that the money should spend on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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Before discuss
about
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which basic
inflastructures
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infrastructures
infrastructure
, new railway
lines
 and
a
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public transport, are the
first
 priority. The pros and cons of each
system
 must be
firstly
 indicated. Both of them are required for
the
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transportation improvement.
However
, we have a limited budget
cause
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by
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a lots
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a lot
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 of basic
system
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 that need
a
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maintanance
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maintenance
.
Therefore
, data analytics can be applied to prevent mistakes from choosing the wrong
system
.
The public
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 transportation can distribute civilization from a capital city to the
local
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locals
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. To answer
this
 question,
characteristics
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 of cities and geologies must be
main
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 factors. If those cities have already got a good
distribution
system
, people and goods. The money must
be go
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 to existing public transport. Consider
at
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constructing new railway
lines
 for very fast trains between cities.
This
 project is required
a
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new management.
Firstly
,
location
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 of new
lines
 must be indicated before drawing a plan. The difficulty will come in
surveying
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 process.
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Residents
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Resident
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A resident
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 might sell
an
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expensive land
for
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government
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.
Moreover
, some of them do not need to leave
thier
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their
 properties eventually you offer a high land's price.
Second
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 is
involvements
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involvement
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of
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constructions
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construction
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. The problem would
occure
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occur
 when contractors get stuck with something. Those are instants of
obstrucles
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obstacles
 from building
a new railway
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a new railway line
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lines
.
In
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 the other hand, using money on improving the existing public transportation is
the
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 low tricky solution
compare
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 with the new construction. It requires a literally low budget
,
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 or more efficiencies in
a
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 same budget. We already have
the
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 useable
system
that is
 ready for
the
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improvement.
Nevertheless
, the
distribution
 of
transport
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the transport
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system
 will be very poor. In conclusion, the selection must be based on data
of
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 existing
inflastructures
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infrastructures
infrastructure
. It is a good idea if new
lines
 can increase the flow of goods
distribution
, even though we need to spend a high amount of money.
Conversely
, if we already have
the
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 high
distribution
 rate of people and
product
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products
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. The best solution is
maintenance
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the maintenance
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 and development of the
exist
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 one.
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