Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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In our society, some
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live most of their lives in
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area where they were born and raised. I believe, they feel more comfortable
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their home town with their own
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. In
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essay, I will discuss the reasons and pros and cons of doing so. In the running days, the world has become a global village.
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left their cities and countries to live somewhere else for better prospects of earning and studying.
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, some backward minded individuals insist on living
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the place where they
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and spent their initial part of life.
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, they even believe leaving that place will affect their religious beliefs and family traditions.
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, parents do not allow their children to study abroad
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fear that they will forget their religion or family norms.
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,
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sector of the community is considered
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and lower class. They miss the opportunity of exploring the potential of the world.
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, they earn below the average because they are rigid towards their area where they have opened their eyes rather than exploring other places with more work prospects.
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, those who left their home towns feel
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and loneliness but they are more likely to succeed because of leaving their comfort zone.
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, youngsters leaving their country
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study or job have more chances of success as compared to someone staying
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place they
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. To conclude, some
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spend their entire life where they were born because of the level of comfort and attachment with it. They enjoy the company of their community but failed to explore the world and its potential.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Familiarity
  • Comfort
  • Social ties
  • Family ties
  • Belonging
  • Resources
  • Opportunities
  • Fear
  • Unknown
  • Financial constraints
  • Cultural attachment
  • Language barriers
  • Limited education
  • Skills
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