In many countries, people would rather rent a house instead of buying one. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting
These days, many people have a tendency of renting a living space
instead
of owning it. It is very clear that there are both benefits and drawbacks to renting an apartment. In Linking Words
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essay, I will discuss both perceptions with relevant reasons and examples.
On the one hand, renting a flat is able Linking Words
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benefit those who have to move from place to place very often. Fix the infinitive
apply
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means that it is more convenient for them to rent a flat just for a certain period of time, Linking Words
for example
, six months or a year rather than having to buy a home everywhere they have to move. Linking Words
Moreover
, apartment rentals are extremely effective for those who cannot afford to buy a mansion on their own. For those people, apartment rents are the only opportunity to be able to have their own space.
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On the other hand
, renting can be regarded as an additional expense for households. Linking Words
This
explains that if the families do not need to pay for the rental fee, they can use that money on other effective areas like family gatherings, group trips, etc... Linking Words
Furthermore
, the decoration and repairment the people are allowed to do are limited since the houses are not theirs which means they will never consider the house as their own.
In conclusion, it is obvious that renting a place has both positive and negative situations. In my opinion, I believe that the families need to save money enough to buy houses on their own while they have to live in rental places.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite