Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?
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, I will discuss the benefits brought by entertainers to modern society and Linking Words
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, I will discuss if there are other jobs which must be well-paid nowadays.
It is a well-known fact, that the only people who develop the culture all around the world are those who Linking Words
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, the best way to increase the cultural level is to motivate people to create entertainer establishments, Linking Words
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as performances in the theatre, exhibitions and concerts, where citizens can get knowledge and spend their free time with benefit. Linking Words
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, the majority of individuals will not organize these ideas due not low-paid jobs and Linking Words
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is the most important reason why the government should support them with big sums of money. Linking Words
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, the young generation's behaviour and development directly depend on the music, cinema, theatres and so on. Linking Words
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in hospitals or universities do not get enough money, their numeric of them will dramatically decrease. From my point of view, these are the most important professions.
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, there are other types of jobs which must be well-paid, too.Linking Words
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