Even in today's advanced era, many people believe that bicycles are the best way to commute from one place to another. How far do you agree or disagree?

In

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contemporary epoch, despite the extraordinary progress in

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transportation technology, many discern that travelling using conventional methods

such

as cycling can be the most useful way. Personally, I agree with that opinion to a large extent.

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, even with the tremendous scientific breakthroughs that have

occured

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recently, innovators and engineers could not answer some of the serious drawbacks of the modern translocation. To illustrate, when more travellers use vehicles, trains, trams, and buses, they produce more exhaust fumes and greenhouse gases, which, in turn, aggravate the global warming dilemma

that is

already deeply concerning. In fact, according to an article that has been published by Nature magazine, pedalling alone can reduce the average fingerprint of carbon dioxide emissions of individuals tremendously.

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can be observed

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using alternative methods to reach destinations other than cars can protect the environment.

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bicycle

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can

also

have positive outcomes when it comes to health.

In other words

, if a person uses bicycles more frequently, he will burn more calories, and

thus

will decrease his chance of developing a plethora of diseases which are pertinent to obesity. As a matter of fact, according to multiple articles that have been published on the PubMed medical platform, many cardiologists believe that by controlling cholesterol and glucose levels, walking and cycling can reduce a myriad of cardiovascular diseases,

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and even improve some

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cognitive

abilities.

Therefore

, it can be observed that using means of transport that require physical exercise does not only mitigate the environmental damage, but

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also

can ameliorate a considerable number of the modern pernicious body syndromes. In conclusion, after

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essay has manifested the abovementioned points, it can be

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reiterated

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that despite the recognizable advancements that have happened in

transporation

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transportation

infrastructures,

conservetive

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conservative

techniques for moving around the metropolises

such

as pedalling can be indispensable due to their positive impacts on people's well-being and

also

the plant, and I am a staunch believer of that.