The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree?
Advertising has become
the
essential role in society for many years whether Correct article usage
an
people
like it or not. Mostly, people
find it annoying and disturbing and others think that if all diversites
of advertising are banned from society, it would be really enjoyful and bring many benefits to them. Correct your spelling
diversity
diversities
However
, I don't accept the idea of this
and explain the reasons why advertising should not be banned and describe which important parts of the roles are contributed by it.
From the view of finance, it can be said that advertisements are main
ingredients of the businesses and supporters of many Correct article usage
the main
entertaiment
industries. Correct your spelling
entertainment
For Example
, TV Channels and TV Programmes are mainly depended
on the funds from Replace the word
dependent
commercial
and Fix the agreement mistake
commercials
as a result
, people
can enjoy series and shows with the ease of minimum cost and sometimes free. Also
, it provides many employments to people
these days as technology developed so much
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many
people
can now become social influencers and youtubers
whose income are Correct your spelling
YouTubers
maily
come from the advertising.
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mainly
Furthermore
, that is
not always true adverstiements
are waste of time and useless all the time because they help us to find the things we need and often show us new interests that can intrigue Correct your spelling
advertisements
our
amusement. But there are Correct pronoun usage
us
also
bad things related to this
phenomenon like interruputing
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interrupting
everytime
when we focus on something Replace the word
every time
especially
when we are into the TV shows and it suddenly turns out with the commercial time. Another worst thing is phone advertising that Add the comma(s)
,especially
are
basically breaking other Change the verb form
is
people
's privacy and sometimes damaing
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damaging
business
opportunities of others because Correct article usage
the business
chaches
are likely to miss with a split Correct your spelling
chances
churches
of
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apply
second
.
To conclude, advertising come along with pros and cons but Add an article
a second
it's
advantages are Replace the word
its
outweighting
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outweighing
it's
drawbacks. Replace the word
its
Moreover
, all types of advertising are not troubling people
but somes
are.Correct your spelling
some
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