The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences. Only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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in cosmopolitan cities, several

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opine that

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trend could call tremendous impacts on society and assist that the

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can only take some actions. In

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essay, I will discuss my support for the

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view.

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of all, the

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is the only way to fix

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problem since it has taxes to build more

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house

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. It is well known that it causes a lot of expenses in order to build a plethora of

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.

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don’t have enough financial income to build a

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. If the

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builds

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by tax, they can lower the number of

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who

does

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not have a

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and receive

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when

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purchase homes.

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, my

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in South Korea, which is located in a heart of

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, is built by the

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as our area had a lack of residential

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. Due to the

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action, our

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has enough

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place

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to reside now. All in all, due to

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, only the

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can solve

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issue.

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, the

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have

a

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power to

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a campaign to make

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transfer to rural areas to live. In order to lower the percentage of the shortage of housing, the

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can distribute

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for

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those who relocate their

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in

countryside

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the countryside

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. If a lot of

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move their

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to suburb areas, there will be many

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house

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that is

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vacant.

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, South Korea recently gave

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to the

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who transferred their

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house

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to

rural

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place

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. After

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campaign, there was

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abrupt increase in the rate of

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who started to reside in

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countryside.

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, youngsters

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started to relocate

in

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suburban areas and seek a job there. To sum up it is clear that a campaign can be held to fix

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issue, which only the

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can do. In conclusion, the

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is the only hope for the metropolitan cities to solve their issues about decreasing amount of

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number of

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in cities where

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can live since it has

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and power.