Production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming. Why global warming is considered one of the most serious issues nowadays? How can this problem be solved?

These days, one of the major issues in the world is
protection
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the protection
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of the
environment
.
Therefore
, many scientists and governments try to find the best way for decreasing
the
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air
pollution. Because
this
issue is caused to global warming and
destruction
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the destruction
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of the natural habitat. In
this
essay, I will examine some of the
problem
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in detail and
then
propose some solutions.
Firstly
, one of the main causes of product the
greenhouse
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of greenhouse
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gases and
air
pollution is using of
the
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fossil fuel and coal. Because they are brunt by many vehicles, factories and
air
plans.
Therefore
, burning fossil fuel and coal result in a lot of carbon dioxide and toxic fumes. When these fumes are increased in
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
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, they can react and mix with oxygen and water.
These combination
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can produce
the
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acid rain which harms
to
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the natural habitat. It has serious and
danger
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effect on our skin and
pollute
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the water and soil.
Secondly
, global warming leads to increasing the temperature. It can affect
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of polar ice
cabs
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caps
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. If the polar ice caps are melted, the level of
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the sea
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and ocean will rise up.
Consequently
, many places will be flooded and many animals will
died
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. I believe, the best way
for
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define
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the
environment
is decreasing using fossil
fuel
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fuels
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and coal.
In addition
, the government should replace
the
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clean energy with them as soon as
possibility
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. The other solution is all countries should sign a protocol for
fruition
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the fruition
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of production the
greenhouse
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of greenhouse
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gases. To sum up,
todays
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today's
today
many developing countries and developed countries consume a lot of energy which
bring
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to
air
pollution and global warming. They are the most essential issues that the government and all
of
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people
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the people
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should try to solve
them
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and keep the
environment
.
Also
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the government should make many laws
for
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protection
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protect
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the
environment
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • greenhouse gases
  • atmospheric heating
  • global warming
  • extreme weather events
  • rising sea levels
  • ecosystem disruption
  • heatwaves
  • droughts
  • species extinction
  • economic implications
  • disaster relief
  • tipping points
  • renewable energy
  • energy efficiency
  • carbon sequestration
  • reforestation
  • afforestation
  • sustainable agriculture
  • methane
  • nitrous oxide
  • international agreements
  • Paris Agreement
  • emissions reduction
  • lifestyle changes
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